Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Sentence Composing Practice 3,4,5

Practice 3)
Dark, Velvety.
Slow, weary, the cautionary of his steps was caused by the surrounding overexcited horses.
Delicate, tender, the softness of her skin was luring to her new proud parents.

Practice 4)
1. Wordless, Wet
Laughing
, we were on our way.
2. Cold, dark, windowless. Hot, humid, muddy.
Crisp, cool and cutting, the air stood still on the bright Sunday morning.
3. Afraid, happy
Anticipating
the next evening with anxious hearts full of joy and exuberance, they lay awake.

Practice 5)
1. Carefully
2. Shivering and shaking,
3. Helpful and hopeful

Sunday, September 14, 2008

Beowulf Essay

In the book “Beowulf”, some readers may see Beowulf as prideful and arrogant, however, Beowulf has earned the right to boast of his victories. Beowulf has battled many creatures of all kinds through the years and is very credible when he speaks of his triumphs. Clearly, he is prepared to face the mighty and ferocious Grendel, along with his mother. There are many references in the book to Beowulf being a credible warrior. For instance, in book 8, Unferth speaks harshly to Beowulf and stretches the truth about his encounter with Brecca. He says that Beowulf lost the battle because he wasn’t strong enough, but Beowulf comes back and tells the real story of his battle with sea monsters. Another example is found in book 10. Beowulf makes the public decision to defeat Grendel weaponless, using only the strength in his bare hands. Some may consider this a foolish thought. Once again, Beowulf proves his strength by defeating Grendel in the next book with no other weapon than his robust hands. At this point even more than before, he has the right to boast of his strength. Then, in book 21, Beowulf makes a daring promise. He tells King Hrothgar and the Danes that he will kill Grendel’s mother, and he only needs one day. If broken, this promise would have let down the entire kingdom. The Danes had no need to worry. Beowulf defeats Grendel’s malicious mother, vicious and vindictive, on his own after one day. Through all of these triumphs, it is obvious that Beowulf was not an arrogant warrior. He understood his strength, and assured the people he served that he would take care of them.

Thursday, September 11, 2008

Sentence Composing #4

Practice 1
1. E, Frantic, never turning my head-because the water buffalo had started his charge
2. D, Able to move now
3. A, Alive
4. C, Lonesome
5. B, Hot and justy and over-wearied

Practice 2
A) SPEECHLESS, Bryson scanned the small living room, frantically.
B) Uncomfortable, Kendra spotted the soft inviting sofa, hopefully.
C) Breathless, Nathan reached the end of the football field, gloriously.

Thursday, September 4, 2008

Sentence Composing #3

1. Laughing and yelling and celebrating, the winning team cavorted inside the locker room.

Ticking and tocking and chiming, the grandfather clock sounded within the haunted house.

2. She raced back determined, her lungs bursting.

He lie down weeping, his heart in pieces.

3. Afraid, Clark walked down the alley and hoped that he was alone there.

Famished, the little boy sprinted towards his grandmother's house and knew that he would soon be dining.

4. The arena was full, a huge cavern filled with fans, bright lights, and exciting music.

Her bedroom was luring, a small haven of spring tulips, soft lights, and open windows.