Sentence Composing #6

Practice 2
Model: Suddenly
Afterward, Jasmine, who had read the novel for over two hours, sat up in bed with her nightly snack, a mini Oreo cookie.
Slowly, Mikael, who had been listening intently for twenty minutes, fell into a light sleep with his head on an awfully hard pillow, his desk.

Practice 3
Model: Outside
Inside, the younger children were involved in games while Laura was being tutored near them by her teacher.
Outside, the older kids were playing basketball while the younger ones were being read to away from them by the mayor.

Practice 4
Model: Here
There, the water smelled like fish.

Model: Slowly, methodically, miserably
Cautiously, carefully, quietly, he aimed for his target.

Model: Very slowly and very carefully
Very loudly and very obnoxiously, he turned on the x-box and cranked the volume high, singing annoying songs while his game loaded.