Thursday, November 6, 2008

Sentence Composing #7

Practice 2
model: visibly
When she told him, she tried to excuse herself, lamely.
Before the waves crashed, the seagulls tried to escape, unsuccessfully.

Practice 3
model: slowly and evenly
She crossed Washington Avenue, confidently and purposefully.
They crept along Hynes street, quietly cautiously.

Practice 4
1) Model: slowly
Sample: triumphantly
Near the end, she sighed, gratefully.

2) Model: quietly
Sample: dreamily
We strolled down the road, nostalgically, where the children played with an old, tattered, red ball and chased each other until dusk.

3) Model: heavily
Sample: desperately
She was sobbing, uncontrollably, among her closest friends, until a man, the the father she never had, whisked her up into his arms.

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